LCC8 Relay/Ring 2 Final

This is a comparison of the initial to final English translations for the LCC8 Relay's Ring 2.

Initial Text

The small girls came early to the hanging.
It was still dark when the first three or four of them sidled out of the hovels,
quiet as cats in their felt boots.
A thin layer of fresh snow covered the little town like a new coat of paint,
and theirs were the first footprints to blemish its perfect surface.

Final Text

The sun has burned me so that I was very hot and dry, while that young man, the poor one, was walking near me.
The man who had been leading the big cat with me was walking there as well.
The cat wanted attention (lit. wanted him to know it) and he felt that.
Suddenly the big cat quickly teared the rope to free itself and bit the man intensively.
Due to the embarrassing circumstances, the man covered his white face with his black hands.

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